RUGBY
You are not aloud to do penalty and, you are not aloud to come in from the side. or then it will be a penillte so then you can tap and run and try
and get a try if you don't get a try,if you don´t, try and go down and over so the oposition does not
get it. You can bunt sidestep but you can not shonlder charge because then it will be a penalty and you will get cent off so you will get cant off and chck to chck/ my goal is to use more pnctuation thank you for reading it
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ReplyDeletelots of descriptive language in that story good job but i just think you need to go back and check the writing cos there is a couple of errors.
ReplyDeleteWow lots of descriptive language in your explanation now I know about rugby Just fix up your punctuation.
ReplyDeleteHI jack this has lots of great descriptive language and this helps my understatement with rugby but just check the spelling :)
ReplyDeleteI like how you said your goal and you. you may want to work on your spelling from Daisy
ReplyDeleteHi Jack.When I was reading your writing I thought it was a great idea because rugby is a sport that lots of people play and it would be important to know the rules. I also thought that the photo looks really good with your writing. Also I like how your words are highlighted because they pop out lots more. But I think you need to go through your writing and check for the spelling mistakes and some of your punctuation. Anais
ReplyDeleteHi Jack I like your writing. But Maybe check your spelling.
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